Robert Fagles
Robert Fagles was not a movie star, director, producer or screenwriter. He was merely a translator, but if it wasn’t for his lucid, readable adaptations of The Iliad and The Odyssey my understanding of classic literature would be much poorer. Why not read one today?
Spielberg: 1941 part 2
1941 is known as a “comedy spectacle,” a kind of Animal House Goes to War. It is occasionally raunchy, but in a light-hearted, good-natured way. Much bigotry is on display, but it invariably comes from idiots and slobs. It has a sunny, generous, forgiving attitude to the morons and clowns who populate its sprawling, unwieldy plot. I think this attitude, which I ascribe to Spielberg’s approach toward the screenplay, is a mistake.
When I got my “collector’s edition” of 1941 a couple of years ago, the first thing I noticed is that it’s a terrible transfer of a terrible print. The second thing I noticed was that it was twenty-odd minutes longer. So the folks at Universal are saying, essentially, “You know that movie everyone hates? Well now it looks awful and is longer than you remember! The quality of the transfer is still a mystery to me, but it turns out that the longer cut is Spielberg’s. On my first viewing, the “restored” scenes felt superfluous at best and clunky at worst — they threw off the rhythms of a movie that had always had problems but which had always at least moved at a decent clip.
On a second viewing, the DVD still looks abysmal but the restored scenes revealed a darker, more cynical, subversive aspect to the movie.
1941‘s theme is “wartime madness.” Characters in the movie use the threat of invasion as an excuse for all kinds of socially inappropriate behavior, ranging from petty theft to attempted murder. Sex is uppermost on the minds of many folks, but for others the plot machinations of 1941 are an excuse to give vent to unchecked prejudices. Since everyone likes sex, let’s discuss that first.
SEX. As everyone knows, the movie begins with Cmdr Mitamura’s submarine “skewering” (Spielberg’s word) a skinny-dipper off the coast of Northern California. It then moves on to Donna Stratton’s airplane fetish and Maxine’s soldier fetish, not to mention Capt Kelso’s free-floating infantilism. In the “restored” cut, there is a darker version of this. The female dancers at the USO club are coached by their leader Miss Fitzroy that their job is to “entertain” soldiers and sailors before they go off to war. Nothing is left to the imagination as to what “entertaining” constitutes — Miss Fitzroy is, essentially, a madam for the US government, telling the women of the country that it is their patriotic duty to submit to the desires of horny soldiers. Many of the young ladies at the USO eagerly agree with this advice — they’re as crazy about soldiers as Donna Stratton is about planes. “Good girl” Betty Douglas feels less certain — she’s kind of sweet on non-soldier Wally, and has come to the aggressive attention of meathead antagonist Chuck Sitarsky (who in turn is the object of Maxine’s unwanted desires). Before leaving for the big dance, Betty’s father Ward takes her aside for what we suspect is going to be a “be careful” lecture. But no! Betty’s father gives her the exact same orders as Miss Fitzroy. As Ward is too old to fight in the war and his sons are too young, he feels that whoring his daughter out to departing soldiers is the best he can do to contribute to the war effort. (Ward, of course, later gets to contribute to the war by shooting off a big gun, destroying his home in the process. Wartime fetishes, apparently, will destroy the American home — not to mention significant portions of Hollywood.)
Now then:
RACE. There is a scene somewhere in Act II of the restored cut of 1941 where Pvt Jones, a black soldier, reports for duty in Sgt Tree’s tank crew. The otherwise-white crew members humiliate Jones, and one, Pvt Foley, goes so far as to paint his face white. It’s an ugly scene, not at all funny, and it throws the movie deeply out of whack. But on a second viewing I found it to be the tip of an iceberg of racial undertones that make up an entire missing “shadow movie” that moves underneath the text of 1941 like Mitamura’s submarine runs underneath the waters of the Califorfornia coast.
We could start with the cast’s general animus toward the “Japs,” but that aspect is fairly well known, and we know that the filmmakers don’t hate the Japanese because Mitamura is the most dignified and honorable character in the movie. Let’s start instead with Wally, one of the major protagonists (and the sole protagonist of the original script). Wally Stephens is played by Bobby DiCicco, and, despite his dark hair and eyes, exudes about as much “ethnicity” as Barry Williams. Wally is criticized by Sgt Tree and his crew for his taste in clothes several times during the movie, once for his garish Hawaiian shirt commemorating Pearl Harbor (which makes no sense to me) and again for his sleek black-and-red zoot suit. In the theatrical cut, Wally’s zoot suit has no racial importance, but in the restored cut we see Wally hanging out with his Mexican friends before entering the big dance. And of course, any student of Los Angeles history knows that the zoot suit was the trademark of the Mexican hipster in LA, and one of the underdeveloped plot strands of 1941 is the zoot-suit riots of the 1940s, where servicemen battled Mexicans (apparently prodded by a bloodthirsty media — the “riots” were announced, and promoted, in advance by racist radio commentators). So Wally, it seems, if not Mexican himself, is “identified” as such by the racial indicators of the script.
Then there is Capt von Kleinschmidt, the Nazi tagging along with Mitamura, who keeps his Nazism in check for most of the movie, but ultimately informs Mitamura that he and his yellow-skinned countrymen have no place in Hitler’s thousand-year Reich. Von Kleinschmidt is immediately thrown overboard for his bigotry, but many other characters are not punished so greatly.
General Stillwell is accorded great dignity and gravitas by the filmmakers, and gets big laughs when we see him tearing up at Dumbo. In the theatrical cut, we see Stillwell laughing along with the crows as they taunt Dumbo, but in the restored version the scene goes on much longer and includes almost the entire “elephant fly” song. Stillwell knows the song by heart and recites it along with the movie characters, and when it’s over he applauds and invites the officers around him to join in. At first this scene felt like padding, but then I remembered that the crows in Dumbo are minstrel characters. It’s one thing to show Stillwell chuckling along with a racist cartoon, but to show him reciting the lyrics by heart and then applauding implies that, beneath his calm, sane exterior, Stillwell is as racist as Pvt Foley — he just doesn’t know it.
Where are the Jews in this World War II movie from the future director of Schindler’s List? I can identify two. First is USO bandleader Raoul, who, apropos of nothing, reveals his last name to be Lipschitz, which makes him a typical Hollywood Jew, changing his name to something dark and glamorous to make it in show business. Then there is the infamous gnat Herbie Kazlminsky, who, in addition to being a stereotypical Jew, is a dead ringer for the director. To drive the point home, Spielberg gives Herbie a ventriloquist dummy who looks even more like Spielberg than Herbie does.
(Wait — there is a third, Hollywood Bigshot Meyer Mishkin, who is the judge at the dance contest. His character is also a Hollywood Jew, but one from the other side of the table — a shot-caller, not a performer. They didn’t need to change their names — they didn’t need to be loved by the public.)
(It’s odd that in a movie filled with so much racism, no Polish jokes are lobbed at Sitarksky, and the presence of an Italian neighborhood-watch captain, complete with old-world Italian harridan wife, goes unremarked.)
The setup scene between Pvts Foley and Jones is missing from the theatrical cut, but its answer scene remains: in Act IV, a bag of flour or something explodes in Pvt Jones’s face, rendering him white. Foley laughs heartily at this and is answered with an explosion of soot in his own face. When Jones laughs back at Foley, he screams in horror at the notion of appearing to be black.
All these scenes imply that 1941 had, at some point in its development. a much darker, more satirical, more subversive purpose, to suggest that America is an inherently racist, sexually perverse country and that wartime is welcomed by Americans as an excuse to vent that racism and perversion. That message is certainly as true today as it was in 1979, but it explains why John Wayne and Charlton Heston both recoiled in horror when Spielberg asked them to play Stillwell.
There is a moment in the “making-of” documentary where Spielberg recalls Wayne’s reaction, saying that he felt the script was “a slap in the face” of America and the memory of World War II. Spielberg then amends the comment by saying that 1941 is a pie in the face of America and the memory of World War II. Between those two “face” comments, I think, is where 1941 went wrong. Spielberg was given a script with some relatively serious questions to ask about America’s national character and responded by making a movie that is primarily about stuff blowing up. Spielberg mentions that when he got the script he skipped straight to the end because he wanted to read the scene where the Japanese submarine blows up the Ferris Wheel on the Santa Monica Pier, loved it, and wanted the rest of the movie to be just like that.
That is, indeed, the net result. The nice thing is that, as spectacle, 1941 works pretty well, and once the big USO dance-contest set piece kicks in, the movie hits a groove, mows down its lapses in narrative logic, and gets by on sheer kineticism for the rest of its considerable running time. The action sequences, always and forever a Spielberg forte, sizzle and pop as they should, and the craziness reaches an appropriate fever pitch in the final reels. But I for one will from now on watch 1941 and wonder about the other movie that’s hiding in there somewhere among the hijinks.
Richard Widmark
I can’t say that the death of Richard Widmark, at 93, is much of a surprise at this point, but I must say I’m disappointed his death was not caused by being pushed down a flight of stairs by a giggling psychopath. And I say that with the deepest respect.
Spielberg: 1941 part 1
Everyone knows that 1941 is flawed. Spielberg knows it, the screenwriters know it, the studios that released it know it, most audiences know it. The question I wish to address here is why it is flawed. What is wrong with 1941, and how could it have been a better movie?
For this journal entry, I got out that abysmal DVD (there is no other version available) and watched the movie again. I did some research and found that this longer cut is, in fact, the cut Spielberg prefers, so I tried watching it again to see if perhaps, somehow, there was something I had missed in my prejudice against abysmal DVD transfers. I found, in fact, there was. The deleted scenes, while not making 1941 a “better” movie per se, point toward the movie 1941 was trying to be, a movie that seems to have gotten lost somewhere in the development process.
End of tangent.
Where are the flaws of 1941? How did it go wrong? Anyone familiar with this journal will be able to guess my answer — the director took his eye off the protagonist. Everything wrong with 1941 stems from a decision made, early on in the process, to stick a bunch of stuff in the narrative that has nothing to do with the protagonists’ pursuit of their goals.
Who is the protagonist of 1941? As it stands, there are several — three, by my count. The “restored” version indicates a stronger argument for a more classical single protagonist, and the “making of” documentary that fills out the DVD backs this up. The single protagonist of the original screenplay was Wally, the jitterbug-crazy kid who wants only to win a dance contest with his girlfriend and who winds up becoming a war hero. This is a perfectly decent character arc and would have formed the spine of a much better movie.
WHAT DOES THE PROTAGONIST WANT? As it stands, the movie has three protagonists I can identify. They are Wally, Lt. Birkhead and Cmdr Mitamura. Wally wants to win the jitterbug contest, Lt. Birkhead wants to bang this one girl, and Cmdr Mitamura wants to achieve “honor” by destroying Hollywood.
Now then: there are problems even here. Lt. Birkhead’s story conks out at the end of Act III, which makes him a minor protagonist at best, and we find, in Act IV, that Mitmura is, in fact, Wally’s antagonist, somethingthat neither character realizes until the beginning of Act IV. A protagonist who doesn’t even know he has an antagonist until Act IV is a very sad protagonist indeed, which is why I’m going to go ahead and call Mitamura a second protagonist. That, and there is a serious lack of antagonists in 1941. There is only Sitarsky, the meathead soldier who stands in Wally’s way of his goal, and Von Kleinschmidt, the Nazi who hangs out with Mitamura. Neither functions terribly well as an antagonist, which is another slight problem the movie has. 1941‘s lack of serious antagonists indicates a central problem of the movie — it has a generally sunny, light-hearted, forgiving, generous view of humanity, a stance in direct opposition to its screenplay.
Let’s go back to Wally for a moment. Wally has a girlfriend, Betty, whom he wants to take to a dance and win a jitterbug contest. Wally has a number of forces arrayed against him: he’s not a soldier (which makes him a second-class citizen), he wears a zoot suit (which casts him in an unfavorable light and means he can’t get in to the “soldiers only” dance hall, which has been converted into a USO), Betty’s father doesn’t approve of him, and there’s this guy Sitarsky who wants to muscle in on his action. Wally’s story arc goes like this: he steals a zoot suit from a department store by creating a fake air raid, he goes to Betty’s house to meet her and instead confronts Sitarsky, who beats him up and sends him packing. In Act II, Wally goes to the big dance contest, steals an army uniform to get in, finds Betty, and is confronted by Sitarsky again. A fight ensues, one that is interrupted by a real air raid. (It’s not a real air raid, but Wally doesn’t know that.) In Act III Wally, by dint of comic happenstance, bests Sitarsky, gets the girl and takes command of a tank. In Act IV Wally, now a tank commander and filled with patriotic fervor, drives his tank out to Santa Monica to do battle with Mitamura.
Here is Lt. Birkhead’s story: Lt. Birkhead is a young, randy general’s aide. He’s got his eye on Donna Stratton, a comely wench with a thing for airplanes. Birkhead knows that if he can get her up into an airplane, Donna can be his. In Act I, he tries to make it with Donna in a parked airplane and fails miserably. In Act II he journeys with Donna to Barstow, where a small airplane in the care of an insane army colonel is located. In Act III he gets Donna up in the air and, after some initial jitters, succeeds in getting a leg over with the comely wench. He is also, however, mistaken for a Japanese plane by the army, which sets off the air raid that disrupts Wally’s arc in Hollywood. In addition to being shot at by anti-aircraft guns in the streets of Hollywood, Birkhead is pursued by Capt. Wild Bill Kelso, a deranged, trigger-happy pilot, and is shot down into the La Brea Tar Pits. Birkhead’s story ends with the conclusion of Act III.
Here is Mitamura’s story: Mitamura is, for reasons unclear, commanding a submarine off the coast of California. He has taken it upon himself to destroy Hollywood. He has a number of forces arrayed against him: his ship is old and falling apart, his crew is incompetent and he’s got this Nazi on board who’s a pain in his ass. In Act I Mitamura, searching for Hollywood, first finds a skinnydipper, then a man named Hollis Wood, neither of whom helps him in the pursuit of his goal. In Act II he kind of isn’t in the movie much, in Act III he locates Santa Monica and settles on that as a substitute for Hollywood and does battle with Ward Douglas, Betty’s father, who happens to have an anti-aircraft gun stationed in his front yard. In Act IV Mitamura battles with Kelso, who comes at him after shooting down Birkhead, and Wally, who arrives with his newly acquired tank. Mitamura shoots down Kelso, blows up Wally’s tank and destroys the amusement park on the Santa Monica pier. He then tosses the Nazi overboard and sails back to Japan, contentthat he has achieved his goal of honor. As he leaves, he also acquires Kelso, who climbs into his submarine.
So far, so good. Three protagonists with neatly interlocking storylines and a coherent “vision” of wartime madness. Everyone in the movie operates under false pretenses, there is never any real threat from anywhere and the protagonists achieve their goals, if only in their own minds.
There are minor protagonists in the movie. There is Joan Douglass, Ward’s wife, whose goal is to keep order in her house. Not only is her goal uninteresting, her pursuit of it is passive and ineffective. She suffers, which is common enough in real life, but a weak arc for a comedy spectacle. There is General Stillwell, whose goal is to keep order in Los Angeles, which for him means going to see Dumbo in Hollywood. Stillwell is an interesting character but a passive, reactive protagonist. And there is Claude Crumm, whose goal is to watch out for submarines from the top of the Ferris Wheel in Santa Monica. He has been saddled with an antagonist in the form of Herbie Kazlminsky, an annoying, hyperactive teen and is, like the others, passive and reactive.
But wait, I hear you cry. Aren’t the stars of this movie John Belushi and Dan Ackroyd? That’s what the cover of the DVD says. Sadly, no. Belushi and Ackroyd play, respectively, Capt Kelso and Sgt Tree. Kelso is a minor antagonist in Lt. Birkhead’s storyline, and Sgt Tree is a minor plot-point in Wally’s storyline. Kelso is there to shoot down Birkhead and Tree is there to get knocked silly during the fake air raid, so that Wally can take command of the tank and become a war hero.
And there, dear readers, is the key to understanding what the primary problem is with 1941. Someone (all signs point to Spielberg) lost track of the protagonist of the movie (that is, Wally) and re-shaped the screenplay to devote significant screen-time to peripheral characters. Here’s what happens: the screenwriters have this minor character, Kelso, whose job it is to be a little trigger-happy and shoot down Lt. Birkhead over Hollywood. Spielberg casts John Belushi, the biggest comedy star on the planet at the time, in the role, and thus decides to expand the part into a major role. Problem is, there isn’t that much more that Kelso can contribute to the narrative. So we have, instead, in Acts I and II, numerous scenes of Kelso flying around, acting crazy and shooting at things, and in Act IV a totally superfluous attack on Mitamura’s submarine. Some of these scenes are indeed spectacular and some are even funny, but none of them contribute to the narrative and thus the audience finds them confusing and they contribute to the movie feeling overlong and unwieldy. Sgt Tree presents another problem which I will get to later.
Then there is the sad case of Hollis Wood. The role of Hollis Wood is, narratively speaking, a minor glitch in Mitamura’s pursuit of his goal. He sends his men ashore to find Hollywood, and they end up with Hollis Wood’s radio. That is all the character is required to do — to provide a radio for Mitamura. Spielberg cast beloved character actor Slim Pickens in the role and so the screenplay needed to be re-shaped to provide something for Hollis Wood to do — in this case, be kidnapped by Japanese soldiers dressed as Christmas trees, be interrogated by Mitamura, swallow a compass found in a box of Cracker Jack (“Popper Jacks” in the movie, for some reason) and be threatened with a prune-juice-informed bowel movement. None of this works for a number of different reasons and at the end of their encounter Hollis Wood gets away, Mitamura doesn’t get his compass (but does get his radio, which is all he needed) and Act I of 1941 is slowed down to a crawl.
(Having cast Pickens in the role, Spielberg could not resist inserting a reference to Dr. Strangelove, when Hollis Wood itemizes, Maj. Kong-style, the contents of his pockets. And for whatever reason, the joke had gone by me the previous 10 times or so I’ve seen this movie. When I did “get” it, it didn’t make the scene better for me — it made it worse. Because I suddenly realized that Spielberg had put Toshiro Mifune (who plays Mitamura), the quintessential Kurosawa star, and Slim Pickens, the icon of one of Kubrick’s greatest moments, in a scene together, put one of them in his underwear, and then had them discuss bowel movements. At one point in the scene, Mitamura turns to the camera and says, woefully, “This has not been honorable,” and all I could think was “I feel your pain, brother.”)
There is much more to say about this intriguing and complex misfire, but this will have to do for now. I will pick this up later, where I will discuss the missed opportunities of the movie and the “shadow movie” that exists beside the existing one.
Mace Windu for Chancellor
Say what you want about the Star Wars prequels, they are excellent tools for teaching a six-year-old boy about the basics of democracy.
Yesterday I was in a post office with my son Sam (6) and he saw a big cardboard standup for the HBO John Adams bio-pic, and he said “Who is that guy? I’m seeing this poster everywhere!” So I started to explain to him who John Adams was and what he did and what his role was in the formation of the United States, and that necessitated an explanation of monarchy vs. democracy, and at that point Sam chimed in and said “Yeah, like in Episode III, Chancellor Palpatine is supposed to be the leader of the Senate, where people are supposed to get together and talk about what’s best for everyone, but instead he’s just making everyone fight each other and sitting back and laughing at them all because he’s really controlling everything.” Then I blinked a few times and decided Sam didn’t need to know that much more about John Adams for a while.
Anyway, we were watching Revenge of the Sith the other day, and if you ever need to explain what is going on in this country right now to a six-year-old boy, you could certainly find worse teaching tools than this movie. All the players are there and the political delineations are as clear as could be. Palpatine is a corrupt, cynical politician scheming to become an emperor, starting a war to give himself expansive executive powers, controlling the Senate and the courts to make sure no one can oppose him, et cetera ad infinitum. This is not news, it’s pretty obvious that the movie is intended as a criticism of the Bush/Cheney doctrine.
And then, about 2/3 of the way through the movie, Sam, apropos of nothing, says “I think Mace Windu should be elected Chancellor.” Which kind of created a moment of clarity for me. Mace Windu (the “stoic” Jedi, according to starwars.com) is a wise, well-spoken, incorruptible warrior-priest, who sees (eventually) what Palpatine is and seeks to remove him from power. He fails, and dies, but Sam is correct — none of this would have happened if Mace Windu had been Chancellor. Which inspired me to make this:
Inspiration here.
UPDATE: Sam just walked in, saw this entry on my computer, and said “That guy with ‘HOPE’ on him? Is either Mace Windu or God.”
Oh, and honestly, I am going to do a post on 1941, and it honestly will be worth it.
Paul Scofield
It is not the function of this journal to become an Endless Parade of Death, but here we are again.
Paul Scofield didn’t make that many movies, and when he did make a movie he generally played classical roles, guys in doublets and funny hats. He’s best known for his performance as Sir Thomas More in A Man For All Seasons (opposite Robert Shaw as Henry VIII, who we were just discussing the other day). But I will always remember him as The Dad in Quiz Show, a film about which
once said: “You could bounce a quarter off that movie.”
One of the things that movies do, for good and for ill, is teach us how to behave. You like to think that, if you were a secret agent charged with saving the world, you could witness the grisly death of a mortal enemy and a witty quip would simply come to you, you wouldn’t need to practice it beforehand or have a running list in your head. You like to think that, if you were a nightclub owner in wartime Africa, you’d have the moral rectitude to force your old girlfriend to go off with her husband for the good of the world, even though every fiber of your being longs to have her with you always. On some level, dramatic structures exist to do just this: to present moral and behavioral circumstances and instruct us on what is the best way to behave under those circumstances. If your father is shot down in the street, you rush to his side and protect him, even if he’s a Mafia don and you can’t stand that part of him — that’s just what one does.
There is a scene somewhere in Act III of Quiz Show where The Son goes back home to ask The Dad for advice in his plight, and it’s the middle of the night, and The Dad is in his bathrobe, and the two men sit at the kitchen table and have some chocolate cake. And Ralph Fiennes and Scofield are wonderful in the scene, and director Robert Redford knows the lives of privileged WASPs like nobody’s business, and it’s a perfectly realized scene of WASPy father-son relations. And it all revolves around this chocolate cake, which symbolizes all the comforts and rights The Son has lost in straying from the True Path, and that cake in that scene is photographed so well, so dark and so light, so moist and so solid, so well photographed that it made me intensely nostalgic for some ideal lost piece of chocolate cake in my own wayward WASP life, and of course for the absence of a kind, wise, brilliant WASP father. Scofield in that scene became a kind of framework I could hang my notions of WASP fatherhood on, and someday, when my own full-grown son comes to my house in the middle of the night with a humiliating tale of dishonoring the family name by cheating on a quiz show, I hope to God I will have the foresight to have a perfectly-realized chocolate cake in sitting around nearby for comfort. And of course the wisdom Scofield so effortlessly conveyed.
Anthony Minghella

Oh my God, I completely missed the news that Anthony Minghella died. The Talented Mr. Ripley is one of my favorite movies of all time and now I’m sad I never got to tell him so. He also directed a stunning adaptation of Samuel Beckett’s Play that was a highlight of the Beckett on Film project, and is well worth seeking out.
At least I don’t have to worry about him being bored or uncomfortable during his long elevator ride to Heaven, he’s got Arthur C. Clarke to talk to. Unless, of course, Clarke went straight to being reborn as a giant foetus orbiting Jupiter.
Arthur C. Clarke

Arthur C. Clarke will, presumably, be re-born as a giant foetus orbiting Jupiter.
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For loyal readers of this journal, bear with me. I am on a deadline for another project, this one that Hollywood staple, the comedy of divine retribution.
Movie Night With Urbaniak: Shadow of a Doubt
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As a break from Spielberg, and specifically as a break from 1941, Urbaniak came over and we dipped into my newly-purchased Alfred Hitchcock Masterpiece Collection (otherwise known as “The Fuzzy Box” for its fake-velour container). There was some discussion about what we should watch — should it be something I’ve seen but he hasn’t (like Frenzy or Family Plot), something he’s seen but I haven’t (like Rope), something neither of us have seen (like Topaz) or something we’ve both seen, a proven winner? “Proven Winner” seized the day and we selected 1943’s Shadow of a Doubt, with Teresa Wright as the small-town girl with romantic dreams and Joseph Cotten as her favorite uncle Charlie.
So let me just take this moment to say: God damn you, you stupid fucking film teachers, why would you teach the work of a director like that?
That would be like teaching film students the Coen Bros by saying “No Country For Old Men is the Coens at their best, it’s full of silences and suspense and minimalist camera movement,” and then pity the poor hapless generation of film students who then encounter The Big Lebowski and dismiss it as a minor work because it doesn’t have any of those things.
A few years ago, I was watching North by Northwest for the fifth or sixth time and, out of the blue, I suddenly noticed something new: Eva Marie Saint is really sexy. How had this plain-as-day fact of the narrative slipped by me before? Because it had nothing to do with what I had been taught was “Good Hitchcock,” and so I had spent the scenes of Eva Marie Saint’s seduction of Cary Grant looking at, I don’t know, the rear-projection plate probably.
I even went through a long period of time where I felt that Hitchcock maybe wasn’t all he was cracked up to be, that perhaps maybe his movies were only “about” moviemaking itself, that he was just a clever technician with nothing “real” to say about humanity. I’m happy to report that I am wrong in this assessment.
What rescued Hitchcock for me? Well, you’ll never guess, but the answer is screenplay analysis. All I needed to do was set aside the brilliant editing, modernist camera movements, etc, and concentrate on the story being told through analysis of the screenplay, and Hitchcock suddenly became a completely different director. Because, after all, the screenplay is what a movie is, the director is nowhere without it, even though my film teachers, in their auteurist fervor, had taught me the exact opposite.
So Urbaniak and I watched Shadow of a Doubt and yakked about the acting. Most of the cast is very fine, and the leads are quite wonderful. Their performances are informed by the 40s style of acting, but are still rooted in an emotional truth, which is crucial for this movie to work, because let’s face it, it’s actually a very small movie, set mostly in a house in a small town (the same town The Man Who Wasn’t There is set in, although I have a hard time figuring out why the Coens made that decision). Two key performances are off, in the room’s opinion — Macdonald Carey gives an absent, vague, glib performance as a detective looking for Uncle Charlie and Urbaniak un-fave Hume Cronyn is technical, showy and didactic as the nosy neighbor (Cronyn’s role becomes much more watchable when one imagines Bob Balaban in the part instead).
Early in the movie, a black train porter walks through a train compartment and delivers a few expository lines to an offscreen Joe Cotton. Urbaniak and I noted the dignity and composure of the actor and joked that he was probably a huge figure in the black American theater, had probably played Shakespeare and was probably a leader of black American actors, but this is the only kind of role he could get in Hollywood movies. Imagine our non-surprise when it turned out our instincts were exactly correct: Clarence Muse was a polymath actor/writer/composer, activist and leader of black American actors, and almost all of his Hollywood credits involve him playing a character named Porter.
So: about that screenplay. Charlie Newton, the protagonist of Shadow of a Doubt, is a small-town girl with big dreams. She wants to escape the bounds of her parochial, complacent small-town life, and just in time her favorite Uncle Charlie Oakley comes to visit. Now then: note how the protagonist of Shadow of a Doubt is, essentially, passive. Charlie longs for excitement, but she’s not doing anything to actually leave town. Instead, she’s going to ask her favorite uncle to come stay — “That’ll shake things up!” she bubbles. Little does she know that Uncle Charlie is already on his way, because he’s lying low trying to escape some detectives who are trailing him. Because Charlie’s favorite Uncle Charlie is, in fact, a serial killer, a charming rogue who likes to woo wealthy widows and then slaughter them like cattle and steal their money.
The first two acts of Shadow of a Doubt move along at a brisk clip, but there is very little explicitly “Hitchcokian” about them — no ironic detachment, no modernist camera moves, no brilliant editing. Why? What’s the matter, was Hitchcock not inspired? Well, no, thanks a lot, stupid film teachers. Shadow of a Doubt is shot the way it is (or isn’t, depending on your point of view) because it’s a very internal story about a protagonist who isn’t even in pursuit of anything. The story is, simply, a girl who’s just nuts about a guy who she thinks is the bees knees, and who, through Act II, starts acting a little weird, to the point where she thinks maybe this wonderful guy isn’t quite so wonderful. At the end of Act II, a mere 60 minutes into the movie, the scales fall from her eyes and she realizes the wonderful guy is the exact opposite of wonderful, and the remaining 45 minutes or so (kind of long for a third act, but not so’s you’d notice) are a suspense-ridden chess game of Uncle Charlie trying to act innocent while trying to kill Charlie, and Charlie trying to get the goods on Uncle Charlie so he’ll leave town.
So if you’re looking for directorial brilliance, try this — make a movie about a passive protagonist, where the narrative hinges about the way she feels about a guy, shoot it all with a minimum of tricks, and have it turn out to be a riveting suspense classic.
A note on Close Encounters of the Third Kind: The Special Edition
At the end of Close Encounters of the Third Kind: The Special Edition, Roy walks up into the base of the Mothership, alone, and stands in the middle of some kind of room. A bunch of doors open and he looks up in awe at the magnificent interior of the vast ship. What he sees, narratively speaking, is an interior city of little aliens, all “indoors” as it were, looking out at him from above and going about their business. There are no aliens there with him at the base of the ship, they’re all waaayyyy up there, a world removed.
The movie then reverts back to its original ending, showing the lone alien traipsing down the landing ramp to say hello to Lacombe, an indelibly touching moment in the original, now reduced to an afterthought. The little last alien then traipses back up into the Mothership and it takes off.
Sitting in a theater watching this back in the day I remember thinking “There’s something wrong with this, but I can’t for the life of me figure out what it is.” It bothered me that we got to see the inside of the Mothership, partly because I thought that if one is making a truly religious movie (and Close Encounters is certainly that), one oversteps one’s bounds when one chooses to depict Heaven. No vision of the interior ofthe Mothership could possibly match the vision that any member of the audience has in his or her imagination. The new ending rankled, it smacked up hubris and spectacle, not faith.
Then, as I’m leaving the theater, I hear a young lady turn to her date and say “So they turned Roy into an alien? Huh.”
And I realize that not only is the “Special Edition” flawed, it’s a serious work of sabotage on a masterpiece. I go see it again and I realize that, objectively speaking, there is no other possible interpretation of the new ending. There’s Roy, there are are the aliens, nowhere near Roy, there are the aliens closing up shop, there’s Roy getting showered with magic UFO pixie dust, there’s an alien coming to say goodbye to Lacombe. Oh. My. God. The young lady with her date isn’t confused, she’s interpreted the ending the only possible way it can be interpreted. So not only is the Lone Alien’s hello-and-goodbye not the first face-to-face communication between an alien and a human, the Lone Alien isn’t even an alien, it’s ROY! And, by extension, the aliens in the movie must all be transformed humans as well! And the Mothership becomes nothing more than a gigantic human-into-alien transforming machine.
The “Special Edition,” quite apart from adding illumination to the original, completely ruins the original. And I spent the next couple of decades trying to figure out how a director as clever as Spielberg, someone with such a firm grasp of cinematic language, could make such an obvious blunder. When the 2002 “Final Edition” (or whatever they call it) DVD came out, I gave an elated sigh of relief to find that Spielberg had come to his senses and relegated the “Special Edition” ending to the dustbin of “Deleted Scenes.” In an accompanying interview, he mentions that the interior of the Mothership was a cinematic mistake, made because the studio pressured him into including it.
I note that the Gobi Desert scene is still in the “final cut,” which does not please me, partly because Lacombe is not in it, which makes it seem ersatz, and partly because the tone of the scene is off — it is jokey and antic while the other UN scenes are mysterious and a little scary — and partly because Laughlin’s beard doesn’t match his beard in the other scenes. I can let this scene go if Spielberg likes it, and the other little additions don’t offend, but oy that ending.
Now I find that they’ve released a three-disc “Ultimate Final Comprehensive Edition” that gathers together the three different cuts that have been issued over the years. Which I suppose is harmless, but as Sheryl Crow teaches us, the first cut is the deepest.